2013年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文題目：給美國(guó)朋友Tom的回信

　　2013年山東高考英語(yǔ)作文題目：給美國(guó)朋友Tom的回信

　　第二節(jié)：寫(xiě)作(滿(mǎn)分30分)

　　假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回郵件：

　　1. 未及時(shí)回復(fù)的原因;

　　2. 你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)。

　　注意： 1. 次數(shù)：120~150;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　【試題點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)題目延續(xù)山東省一貫的提綱作文命題習(xí)慣，時(shí)隔一年之后重新回到“書(shū)信題”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信為外衣，以活動(dòng)安排為主體段”的提綱作文，相當(dāng)于10年山東卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合體。這種作文是我們平時(shí)經(jīng)常練習(xí)的，因此套路很完善、套話(huà)很豐富。此外，本文中需要同學(xué)們翻譯的難句不多，因此，只要在備考過(guò)程中有意識(shí)地了解過(guò)高考英語(yǔ)作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、加分句型和過(guò)渡詞，并加以針對(duì)性訓(xùn)練，這道題目應(yīng)該不難寫(xiě)。

　　【經(jīng)典套路】

　　第一段：?jiǎn)柡?寫(xiě)信背景+寫(xiě)信目的

　　第二段：“道歉”部分(相當(dāng)于“寫(xiě)信背景”)

　　第三段：“假期安排”部分

　　第四段：補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明+客套話(huà)

　　【高分范文】

　　Dear Tom,

　　How are you doing? (問(wèn)候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(寫(xiě)信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(寫(xiě)信目的)

　　How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段為道歉信常見(jiàn)套路)

　　By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主題句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

　　These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套話(huà)結(jié)尾)